RECIPE OF LIFE
Filed Under (3www, One Single Impression, Sunday Scribblings) by Geeta on 16-05-2010
Tagged Under : dreams, fear, reality, recipe, weightless
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Emotions curled,dreams unfurled,
fear and jitters entangled in few,
rare had jauntiness ensue.
Chuckles and smiles for miles had few,
few had tears, tears in queue,
Black, black and black had few,
rare had magenta, white and blue.
All was still and silent in few,
few had everything as fresh as dew.
I trembled as I brewed my thoughts
eyes opened , dreams all lost.
Ignoring made me buoyant,feather like, weightless.…
was it an instant recipe of life in dreams or dreams of reality in crew
I had no cue, I had no cue,I had no cue….
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For 3WW ,OSI #116 , Sunday Scribblings #215
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Wrapped up so beautifully
I like the addition of the color reference in this. And the ending was very good.
I like the colours and shades here, and the way this rhymes too!
A fun read!
Loved this rainbow of words and the rhythm and sounds of it!
Nice
beautifully sequenced with a touch of an enigmatic feeling to it! brilliant!
Well written!
I appreciate you for bringing out the magnanimity of life in few compact words…
Very abstract and subjective poem though my dumbo brain couldnt understand few lines in between…
Great work…
seems like you are taking leaps in writings…
keep evolving the same way…
cheers buddy
How lovely!
I love the sound and rhythm of this piece.
lovely poem…:D
Beautiful
Wow..dreams and smiles and tears and reality.. Life as you said it..all of it..
And you say you have no clue??
This starts on such a dreary mood. Like a death ride or a funeral procession for a loved one. At any rate here life goes on for some, now alone. As to what transpired and what is to be, there is no clue.
Thank you so much, this is very well written. Life.
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You have depicted the shape of life in an interesting, unusual way.
“Emotions curled,dreams unfurled,” my favorite line- just love your poem!! Thanks
beautiful……souns really awesome
Hi Geeta, Thanks for visiting me.. I could reach your blog.. Emotions curled,dreams unfurled … what a beginning.. mind glowed , thoughts flowed.. giving recipe of life…turns out to be a delicious dish.. well done Geeta.. visit me agin to have a look at Tears, Stars and flowers.. keep connected..